Demon Possession (Shadow Quest, #1) - Kiersten Fay This was an okay read. First, the book needs to be edited. Second, although there is a lot of world building, most of the major drama of the book is poorly/thinly written. It may be that there is actually too much world building for the thin writing. The villain's actions are not explained or put into context. His treatment of the h, which sets up her whole persona, is nonsensical. There is also too much TSTL action on the part of both the H and h. I guess there is potential here but if I had paid eight or ten dollars for Demon Possession, I would have been really angry.